Today my class had to write a letter from Ah sum to his family of what his life is like in New Zealand. In this letter I described how Ah sum was feeling in New Zealand and what was making him feel this way. Ah sum was feeling lonely because people treated him poor. They called him chinaman and his Bok Choy Chinese cabbages. It made him feel like he didn't belong in New Zealand. He missed his family very much.
Below is a screenshot of my letter. Do you think i need more description? Have you written a letter before?
very good lord Ben you did i good job in this pice of work
ReplyDeletebut you can add my punctuation in your work and more full
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